My Interpretation
the army you told me
Behind bars n more like it.
you said "i'll be home soon"
Nine years and still counting is more like it.
you say that we always come first
Girlfriend before daughters is more like it.
you took moms hand and said "i'll love you forever"
Forever is shorter than i thought,
divorce is more like it.
they say a father and daughters love is Eternal
but how can you love someone
when all they do
say
feel
is never what it really is
Now thats more like it.
6 comments:
sad, but i like it!
wow heartwrenching..good job
thats really sad :( but its a super good poem
i love your ridiculously long movie list, oh yeah and your poem is good too :)
oh yeah...i forgot to tell you what a great title you have
ty, you are amazing.
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